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Original topic post: Just one day

written by: melk6891
posted: 26.02.2008
message:

 

This poem is the one that I entered into the 'just one day' thing.. but I thought I would put it up here aswell..

Let me know what you think...

I wake up in the morning
And I’m always full with dread,
I sit up in the darkness -
So many thoughts run through my head…

Where is everyone?
Is anybody there?
I shout out but no-one answers,
Why doesn’t anyone care?

No-one’s ever there to turn to,
I suppose it’s always been that way…
No family, no friends, no support in the world,
One day all of the love just went away…

I learned how to cope,
I learned how to be strong,
I had to teach myself
What was right and wrong…

I taught myself how to love and care,
And always helped everyone else…
But one lesson that I never learned -
Was how to love myself…

If only someone had told me,
That what I was doing was wrong.
But no-one cared, no-one noticed -
Its been that way for so long…

I got thin,
I got weak,
But the disease that I had…
Was one I couldn’t beat.

If I could have just one day,
To turn back the hands of time,
I would teach myself that one lesson,
And get back the life that’s mine…

One day could make a difference…
One day could make a change…
But until that one day comes…
I’m left standing in chains…

But I know deep inside,
That one day I will break free…
And when that day comes…
I can finally be … me.

I HOPE…

 


Reply post 1: 'Just one day' poem

written by: samantha xx
posted: 26.02.2008
message:

That is brilliant!!

i can really relate.

Hope you are okay :)

 

xxxxx


Reply post 2: (No Subject)

written by: melk6891
posted: 27.02.2008
message:

Hey, thanks for the comment... I find that poems help me to really understand what is going on around me and in my head... I love writing and I dont know what I would do if I couldnt...

xoxo


Reply post 3: (No Subject)

written by: jesslovesjelly
posted: 08.03.2008
message:

that is fantastic!!

Wow

xx


Reply post 4: hey

written by: melk6891
posted: 11.03.2008
message:

thanks Jess... your comment means alot 2 me :)
I've been writing alot more lately as I'm off school with the flu.. and its really helping me to clear my head..

I started writing poetry as a way to relieve myself ... and although there are hard times.. it helps alot!!

Hope everyone's OK..

Mel xoxo 


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